This week we worked on our series, trying to recreate our photographers images. When we worked on them last week, our peers reviewed each other's series work and we gave constructive feedback about each other's work. I tried to edit and emphasize what I thought was strong with my first series draft and use them in my 2nd series draft.
This is such a strong set of photographs Stefan! The models in the photos look like they are levitating in the air, rather than jumping. Nice job! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteI love your topic in general. It's fun and energetic and entertaining to look at. Your ideas are very unique and a lot look really realistic. My favorite is Giv reading the news paper. Because it looks like he's focused on reading the news than jumping. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI really love your series Stefan! And this set has definitely improved. Your photos are all super exciting and full of energy. In this set, your photos are a lot more unique and include a lot more actions that make the photos really fun. All of your photos make your models look like they are actually levitating. Great work, and keep it up!
ReplyDeleteGreat photos, Stefan! I think you did a good job with this weeks batch, definitely improvement from the last one with the imagination aspect! Good work!
ReplyDeletegreat job! this week your photos are really exciting, and are more realistic. your photos are also more unique. good job
ReplyDeletegreat job, stefan! your fourth and seventh photos really demonstrate what you were trying to portray of Hayashi's work. you definitely achieved your goals.
ReplyDeleteNice work this week! I really like your photos and they definitely look realisitc. A lot of them look like the models are actually levitating, which I know was your goal to capture. This is a great set inspired by your photographer! Keep up the good work, and just watch the obvious signs that the models are jumping (I know it's hard.)
ReplyDeleteThese are really great. I love the photographer you chose. All the pictures actually look like the people are levitating. I especially enjoy that they are doing normal day things in them. Good Job!
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